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Review for Chapter 10 from Europec on May 11, 2010 at 02:35:26 AM
Review for Chapter 10 from Militis on September 12, 2009 at 03:18:12 PM
Wow. That was pretty awesome.

I liked your sarcastic!Harry, and the story was very engaging. I'm really looking forward to the sequel.
Review for Chapter 10 from darklordmike on May 04, 2009 at 05:03:37 PM
Very nice story. I avoided it at first because of the 'horror' label and because it was in the Dark Arts section of DLP's library. That section seems to be reserved for evil! serial killer! rapist! Harry, which just ain't my cuppa.

But really, there's not much that's truly dark about this story. There's plenty of humor, and even the various demons and horrible deaths don't create the black, nihilistic mood that you usually encounter in dark! Harry stories.

Anyway, I'm glad I read I read it, and I look forward to the continuing adventures of sarcastic! Harry. Well done.
Review for Chapter 9 from darklordmike on May 04, 2009 at 04:46:21 PM
"Deeper, Harry! Deeper, Harry!"

"You're on top. Push down harder, dammit!" he snarled. "Bloody hell! Owww!"

LOL--fantastic chapter. And why am I getting visions of the Stay-Puft Marshmallow man? Am I imagining things, are all these Ghostbusters parallels really there?
Review for Chapter 5 from darklordmike on May 04, 2009 at 04:30:11 AM
Nice chapter; excellent development of Padma, and the banter between her and Harry is fun.

A minor nitpick--you tend to spell 'disdain' as 'distain' throughout the story
Review for Chapter 4 from darklordmike on May 04, 2009 at 04:16:37 AM
Harry made his way down the hallway. "Just letting you know up front, Patil, I don't go in for the whole pegging thing so get that out of your dirty mind."

LOL. Harry's deadpan humor in this chapter is fantastic. It reminded me of Bill Murray's character in Ghostbusters for some reason. Is that the sort of characterization you were shooting for, by chance?
Review for Chapter 3 from darklordmike on May 04, 2009 at 04:03:07 AM
Great cliffhanger; I'm not ordinarily a fan of stories that introduce gods and demons into the HP cosmology, but so far you're doing an excellent job of keeping things realistic and intriguing
Review for Chapter 1 from darklordmike on May 04, 2009 at 03:40:08 AM
Fantastic opening chapter. Harry has a wonderfully wry sense of humor, and you did a great job of creating a sense of urgency about his new mission
Review for Chapter 10 from loatroll on April 10, 2009 at 01:12:00 PM
Good work! I liked it, and certainly enjoyed it. I'm hoping for a sequel or whatever.
Thanks for the great read.
Review for Chapter 10 from KrashKou on April 07, 2009 at 10:08:53 AM
:Shock: :Amazement: :Laughter: Hot damn! This was beautifully done! I laughed, I cried, I touched myself with shaving cream. Honestly, this was a great story, it really was! I was a bit leery before I opened it, because it was relatively short in comparison to most of the completed stories I enjoy so very much, but truly, this was a marvelous creation. As for continuations, why? Granted, everyone hopes and hopes for the hero to come out on top, or on bottom, or sandwiched between the other 'survivors' of this story, but hey, when you reach the end, the only thing left is the credits, darlin'.

I'm clapping for you, since you can't hear it. Welllllll done!
Review for Chapter 10 from The Duke on February 23, 2009 at 11:46:17 AM
Great story! I cant wait till the sequel.
Review for Chapter 10 from PapaMidNite on January 27, 2009 at 11:00:30 PM
I like sarcastic Harry, I liked the story, original and well written.

pm
Review for Chapter 1 from jettftw on January 27, 2009 at 02:17:52 AM
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Sorry to burst everyone's bubble on this one...Frank Belknap Long author of "The Hounds of Tindalos" wrote this back in 1931. "Hounds" is a Lovecraftian creation. It's not a Doctor Who quote. Well Doc Who writers quoted him, but it didn't originate from them. Thanks for clearing the problem up though, with the vid, Jett.
Review for Chapter 4 from jettftw on January 26, 2009 at 06:35:36 PM
One of my favorite Doctor Who quotes. Good use of it.
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
You are the third person who has said that. I have no idea what you are talking about, LOL. What line have I quoted?
Review for Chapter 10 from Jeram on December 29, 2008 at 07:20:08 PM
A nice story. I'm glad you were able to bring it all together.
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Thank you!
Review for Chapter 10 from whatareyouevensaying on December 29, 2008 at 07:19:29 PM
Pretty solid conclusion. I do hope you follow it up eventually, since it really does scream "Sequel!"

Looking forward to more.
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Thank you for your comments!
I did leave several little plot holes in place for a sequel. Lets hope my Potter burnout doesn't last for very long. Maybe a little Dresden injection is just what I need.
Review for Chapter 10 from morriganscrow on December 29, 2008 at 06:53:25 PM
Fabulous!
Only Harry would consider symbolically jacking off into the face of an Elder God to be a cool idea!
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Harry wanted to go out with a bang... or a spurt, as the case may be.
Review for Chapter 9 from zooxle on November 27, 2008 at 12:21:54 PM
"Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn."
"In his house at R'lyeh dead Cthulhu waits dreaming."

That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die.

We want MOAR!!!!
Love the story sofar. Would love to see what happens after Cthulhu's "Stone dildo ass-Rape" and am wondering if Harry still needs to hook up with Padma (btw is it just coincidence that Padma works for the "government" because the other Padma, also works for them?? Senator Amadala??? Maby Padma Skywalker as she actually married Lord Dark Helmet, whatever) or are there MOAR!!!! Old Ones comming?

"It was everywhere - a gelatin - a slime yet it had shapes, a thousand shapes of horror beyond all memory. There were eyes - and a blemish. It was the pit - the maelstrom - the ultimate abomination. Carter, it was the Unnamable! "

Zooxle (lurking on DLP since... since... i can't remember)
Review for Chapter 9 from Ellisande on September 03, 2008 at 09:44:07 PM
Wow, I put off reading this for quite a while, expecting all sort of perverted dark horror, must of had this confused with a different fic.

Really enjoyed it, looking forward to the last installment.
Review for Chapter 9 from The Resident on August 26, 2008 at 03:44:37 AM
Wow! I could sure use another chapter. (grin) Well, the 'final' battle is on its way. A nice mix of Lovecraft and Rowling and Derleth. The Cthulhu Mythos always comes up with a real nasty that's a bitch to defeat. Looking forward to how you handle the battle. Keep up the Great Work.
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