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Review for Chapter 6 from chrisguy9017 on December 31, 2009 at 01:23:30 PM
Really cool chapter. I like how Harry is slowly conforming or accepting his life. I mean its not that horrible to be stuck working for them. The fight at the end was cool and harry trump card seems pretty interesting.
Review for Chapter 6 from King Dimension on December 31, 2009 at 05:37:43 AM
awesomeness
Review for Chapter 6 from Lord Ravenclaw on December 31, 2009 at 04:11:48 AM
For the love of God Jon, moaaar. The last two chapters made this even more interesting.
Review for Chapter 1 from King Dimension on December 30, 2009 at 06:41:59 PM
very cool story
Review for Chapter 5 from lordamnesia on December 26, 2009 at 08:18:02 PM
This is a FANTASTIC HP/Dresden crossover! Such an unexplored genre, and you have a new way of looking at it even! Keep up the great work!
Review for Chapter 4 from nimistar on April 01, 2009 at 10:42:16 AM
great story, quite fun to read.
Review for Chapter 3 from tmctflyboy on October 26, 2008 at 03:37:36 AM
i love the story!!!! so i wonder what happend to thomas and paul in the warehouse? by any chance can you tell me when this story takes place in the dresden files books? glad that you have inari as being alot younger, at least personality wise, then harry. love the interactions between lara and harry. look forward to the next chapter, hope its soon
Review for Chapter 4 from merrymowmow on September 23, 2008 at 05:34:58 AM
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Review for Chapter 4 from badboyjazz1735 on July 03, 2008 at 06:37:25 AM
English and grammar are excellent, and I'm impressed with the flow of the story however chracters lack the flare that makes each unique, the charcter such as lara lack definition and depth - where is that sensuous Seductress.

Anyway m sure your gonna hate hearing this but regular updating is a must afterall stories like yours are becoming scare and this is so far one of the best crossovers i have ever read - the others haven't appealed to me like yours has.

A little note (take it or leave it) Harry seems to be a bit of a whimp! can't you give him a little flair, and some mysteriousness - his charcter needs to be stronger, more rebellious (he's still an angry and horny teenager) anyway Keep it up!!

badboyjazz1735
Review for Chapter 4 from electric2book on February 08, 2008 at 05:43:47 PM
Love it. Keep it going. Details all match and the story plot flows. The story is a pleasure to read.
Review for Chapter 4 from tmctflyboy on January 20, 2008 at 07:56:09 PM
love the story, really like how you combined the two worlds together. liked the harry/lara part at the end, for some reason i like her character. look forward to the next chapter
Review for Chapter 4 from Choronzon on January 05, 2008 at 08:41:18 PM
This is a fricken awesome story.

Only things I caught that were wrong were when Beatrice was speaking to Harry. Harry said "betted", which I believe is wrong. Should just be "bet".

You really do a good job on making your characters likable, especially Harry. You made him different but believable, unlike most OOC Harrys.

I'll be watching for more chapters.
Review for Chapter 4 from That Wench on January 04, 2008 at 04:40:24 AM
Hurry up and update, Jon >_
Review for Chapter 4 from Miguel on January 03, 2008 at 06:20:16 PM
Brilliant story, I just got entranced by the universe you created and got to forget about my worries. The best story I have ever read (and I've read many). Looking forward to the next chapter.
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