Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from lonewarrior on September 04, 2010

good story

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 1 from QuickBen on June 10, 2010

I've added your story to me alerts in ff.net. Still, I can't help but wonder y you put the tag on Fleur when Fleur heself doesn't seem to be shaping up into a character who'll be tog with Harry anytime soon - especially if she's with Bill; sexually happy with her partner asides, I don't see how you're gonna be able to pull it off. But good luck.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from SirZic on April 09, 2010

This story is awesome!!! When will you continue it? Z.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from nympotter65 on September 23, 2009

Good read . Hope to read more soon.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from KrashKou on April 19, 2009

You should be hearing wolf whistles and cheers coming from me, but sadly, reviews are text only. Regardless, please know that I'm enjoying this story immensely! I get such a kick out of stories where Harry inadvertently stumbles upon a method of dealing with women hat takes him beyond stuttering and impassioned fumbling. It's not just that which makes this story so enjoyable though. I like the way you have Harry exploring himself as well as the fairer sex. He's getting a decent grasp on his shortcomings in a way that I haven't come across more than a few times, and you're still going at it by a different method. He realizes that he has self confidence and esteem issues, but you're actually taking the time to build upon it instead of Harry going.. "Wow. I can't believe I've been this way! I have magic and friends. I'm cured! No longer am I.." well, you get the point. Self change is an incredibly long and drawn out thing, and it's refreshing to see that considered. Also... woohoo! Boobs! Harry's gettin' some action! Heheh. Sorry, could help it. I do enjoy that aspect of the story as well. It has to be said. It amuses me to no end seeing the voyeur Harry in action. Plus, I don't think I've ever seen the Room of Requirement used in the manner that you've written, so you get big points for that. My only complaint is that it ends at chapter 5, and, from what I can see about the publish/update section, it seems like the story's been abandoned. I hope this isn't the case, I really do. Here's hoping you update again some time, Kidder.

Author reply
Thank you for such a great review! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. Harry still has a lot of growing up to do in the story but at least he'll start to have more help from his both his old and new friends. Even with that it will continue to take time and he'll make a few mistakes along the way. I updated Unknown Memories last month and am about 90% done with Chapter 6 of Room of Requirement. It's already at over 7k words so it'll be a good sized chapter. Hopefully I'll have it finished this coming week and posted before the weekend. The next chapter sort of has a lot of good luck in it for Harry, a couple more realizations and, of course, Boobs. ;-) Let me know if you have any other questions, comments or suggestions. I always enjoy talking about my stories. Fission

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from jaypallas on October 12, 2008

Hi, cool story, please continue.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from hordac85 on September 08, 2008

good

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 1 from M2J MandalorianJedi on August 05, 2008

I'm sure I've read this somewhere else, but I couldn't even begin to tell you where. I like this fic though, it brings a realism of typical teenage hormones that canon lacked, and many fanfic authors overlook.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from morriganscrow on August 02, 2008

You write beautifully! You have clearly outlined Harry as the teen boy/almost man he is, and your other characterizations, especially Hermione and Angelina, are also spot on. The sex is sensual and slightly awkward, as it should be, your dialogue is really fine and the emotional drives and underlying content is very nicely handled. I am adding this to my alert list, as I will be keenly following your progress.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 1 from FenrisWolf on July 11, 2008

A nice start; first time I think I've read one where Harry's voyeurism has made the RoR off-limits in fear of being busted. Now who's going to catch him indulging in his naughty vice...and perhaps reveal a few vices of her own, hmmmm?

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from wolf550e on July 08, 2008

Eloise Midgen is a plant if the Slytherins are any good. Good on Harry, though I'm disappointed by the lack of details. I'm very glad you did not abandon the story!

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from Ph34r_n0_3V1L on July 07, 2008

Good chapter. One little mistake, u have bill down as bull at the end of harry's peeking session.

Author reply
Thanks for letting me know! I'll make sure to change it later tonight.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 5 from Kalen Darkmoon on July 07, 2008

Good chapter. It seems that at least this years Halloween was a good one, hell the best one he's had in his life so far.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 4 from Kalen Darkmoon on June 29, 2008

Not too bad of a story so far. I have a question though about that hot snogging and petting session he just had with Angelina. What about his bleeding hand? Wouldn't she have noticed or been put out a bit from him undoubtedly getting blood all over her or her shirt.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 4 from electric2book on June 23, 2008

Wow, that was amazingly intense!!!!

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 4 from Jeram on June 22, 2008

I like it - I am exceedingly pleased you didn't just jump into the "instant harem" concept, but instead seem to building up to it. Impressive work. Don't screw it up.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 4 from lordblack on June 22, 2008

Brilliant. By a 1000 points, wow!

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 4 from Tenmu on June 22, 2008

When I first began reading this I was expecting just another poorly veiled self-insert/mary sue story riddled with bad writing and cliche plot hooks. Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised after actually getting into the story. Your grammar and writing in general is several points above acceptable which is more than I can say for a good 80% of fanfiction writers. There are, thankfully, few moments of OOC interactions from the major characters, something I must applaud you for. I cannot rightfully criticize your handling of Angelina's character, however, as I truthfully enjoy the way thing have been going between her and Harry. The lime has been tasteful up until this point and aside from the various things you have the Come and Go Room capable of, which I believe to be a stretch, I find nothing particularly bad worth pointing out. Congratulations, you get a gold star.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 4 from ZanyMuggle on June 22, 2008

"Hot" doesn't even begin to describe this chapter - or the story in general, for that matter. I was surprised that Harry didn't go down on Angelina, after his recent in-body experience. Still, if he learns to recognize and play to his partner's needs, he be galaxies ahead for his age. Interesting work - NC-17 with characterization. Thanks for writing and psoting.

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 4 from Jay-F on June 22, 2008

hmmm... well i am curious where you are going to go with Hermione. It looks like you are building up to be something... I am somewhat surprised by how little Harry has abused the power of the RoR by now he must have realized some of the other interesting things he could do with it. Thanks for writing, Jay

Review for Room of Requirement Chapter 1 from lordblack on June 18, 2008

I like, but you really really really need to work on spacing. The beginning was fine, but the paragraphs were too long and make it hard to read.