| Title: Catharsis | Post DH. Harry never knew how badly the words he had said to his son Albus-Severus at King's Cross would come back to haunt him. He couldn't have known how his son would become the herald of the new darkness and come to be known as the Dark Son. After having to annihilate his own child who killed his whole family but his father, Harry chooses not to pick up the pieces and go on, but goes back in time to set everything straight and find out why his son went dark. | |
| Author:nuhuh | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: R | Category:Action/Adventure/Timetravel | Reviews:60| Published: June 25, 2008 | Updated: September 13, 2009 | |
| Tags: Timetravel, Alternate Dimension, Tragedy |
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Review for Catharsis Chapter 3 from whatareyouevensaying on June 29, 2008
Interesting update, it's good to see that Bianca is being decently careful.
Looking forward to more.
Author reply
I thought I should redeem her a little after being caught with her knickers showing. Thanks.
What an interesting chapter. It's terrible - how I much I enjoyed it.
You could even say it was really boring - into my skull with excitement.
In fact, I'll just come right and say that it was an awful mess - of brilliance.
Next chapter, I hope to see more of the same load - of fun.
BTW - you can manually fix the formatting in PC's editor.
Author reply
Yeah but the formatting was so off that it would take me an hour to go through and space out each and every para. I used a work around. And thank you for the veiled - compliments. :)
Mortfidèle...really good one!! It was reasonably obvious it'd be Sirius, given how you introduced him...nicely done there.
What I want to ask is, why is the blood protection still active if Harry's soul has been replaced by the one from the canon universe?
Looking forward to more...are you going to add some more clichés? You are already getting there with the super-power! Harry one...
Author reply
You will get some of your questions answered as the chapters go on. I am trying to make it so that the blood protection never leaves, just the wards associated with it go. Glad you liked Sirius's alter ego.
Who cares about clichés when story is so well written? Maybe not the best story ever, but definitely something original and capable of holding interest.
If you are thinking about writing some more, you are thinking in the right direction.
Author reply
Well, I am glad you like it despite the cliches. Its mostly stress release for me but I am happy other people are enjoying it too.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 2 from whatareyouevensaying on June 27, 2008
Holy effing shit that's a good idea. Dunno where you come up with this stuff, but keep it coming!
You make it sound like you were expecting hostile reviews? You figured everyone would want you to update one of your other stories? Well, they are brilliant, but since you and I share the habit of starting new stories when writer's block strikes on the others (which is often), I didn't even notice.
Looking forward to more.
Author reply
Thanks. I am glad you liked the ideas so much. I figured a little new with a lot of cliches might balance the story out. And yeah, writer's block is a pain. I am beginning to get ideas of where to start with my other stories again though.
Well. You really did manage to squeeze in just about 90% of all clichès ever created. Only thing missing is Founders Heir, Multiple Animagus and Allmighty Harry althoug I can see that one comming already.
Besides all that you managed to write an at least well written story.
Author reply
Shoot, I did forget the multiple animagus. Let me fix that in the next chapter.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 1 from whatareyouevensaying on June 26, 2008
Very good start. This is a fairly unique idea, one that has a lot of potential.
Looking forward to more.
Author reply
Well thank you, that is a much kinder review than I was expecting. Glad you're liking it.
Ah. Well, he's got a dark lord son at the age of forty. Albus-Severus would have been - what? - 14 years old?
Even with the clichés you've done a damn fine job of it. I even think you might have gotten almost all the clichés in...
If this is your way of saying F*** it then its no wonder your other stories are so good.
Author reply
Haha! Thank you. And I really, really, am just saying F' it. Needed to write something that didn't take effort. Stay tuned more cliches to come.
Review for Catharsis Chapter 1 from aduroconglacio on June 25, 2008
Wow. Umm.
I do hope that this chapter is going to be formatted properly.
Author reply
It is formatted properly on Word. I don't know what is happening here. I will try and fix it in the morning. Late for me right now. Thanks for the heads up.
I hate you. I'll read this later. Looks interesting.
Author reply
Jeram you bastard :D :D
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