Review for Past, Present and Future Chapter 2 from Andromalius on April 13, 2009

Sadly for the green eye boy eye->eyed The lamp shattered, the television explode, explode->exploded When Harry shouts "Never", it seems like something a very petulant child would say. Changing it something, like a calm refusal of "No." would be more flattering to Harry. Interesting to see the actions of a Tom Riddle-influenced Harry. The only thing that struck at me was the difference between your writing style and Ceris Malfoy's. I recommend taking the idea from his one-shot and rewriting it to improve the transition.

Author reply
Thank you. Your review woke me up concerning this story and other I have in minds. I will correct the errors you found and will try to make sure there is no more in the next chapter. I juste hope my Beta is still alive and ready to correct a new chapter. It's been months after all :( I barely have time and patience to write this story, I get frustrated a lot trying to figure out how to word some sentence and such, so I will not be rewritting Ceris' oneshot at the moment. Maybe sometime in the future I could look into it. Thank you for your review, it is greatly appreciated! Edvin

Review for Past, Present and Future Chapter 3 from sgtoutlaw on August 08, 2008

I have enjoyed what I have read so far, it is also a very original and yet plausible idea. "‘What make it back up?’ asked a still shocked Harry." Should be "'What made it back up?' asked a still shocked Harry." Other then that one, which for some reason caught my attention, it is pretty good.

Author reply
Why thank you! I'll see what I can do. Modified chapters are a pain in the ass on this site at the moment. :D Thanks for the review, really appreciate this! Edvin

Review for Past, Present and Future Chapter 3 from Alssn on August 08, 2008

Sorting song, which was oh so conveniently forgotten about by the Rowling herself? You are a brave man, but I don't think that providing the lyrics was all that necessary. I like how this story is written and little changes from original timeline provide enough interest for me to keep reading. Still, I would like to see it deviate from canon more. I really like your decision to make Harry more intelligent. Creating his own spells should be fascinating. I will keep an eye on your story; hope you write more soon.

Author reply
Thank you for this review. I forgot to put this note about me knowing the song was quite bad, but I liked doing it. As for more AU, you will see some in the nesxt chapter. Little thing, but big consequences. Regards, Edvin

Review for Past, Present and Future Chapter 2 from sirius009 on July 18, 2008

hmm the chapters are to short, the grammar is decent enough, especially since english isn't your first language. So far i haven't seen much though, right now i could've read the first chapters of POA and gotten pretty much the same thing.

Author reply
I'm mostly trying to find my pace right now. The second chapter will be up soon with some new development. It is still rather short, but I hope to write a bit more. Third chapter is written too, it just miss some littles details. I'll post them soon. The third chapter is approximately 2.5k words at the moment. Anyway, I just hope you'll give this story a chance. Regards, Edvin

Review for Past, Present and Future Chapter 1 from Memory King on June 29, 2008

Very interesting, will definitely be keeping an eye on this. Looking forward to more!

Author reply
Thank you! The second chapter is close to being finalize. Of course, still without a beta reader >.< And the third chapter will follow up soon too. Keep an eye out for this story, it is just starting! Edvin