Review for If You Love Me Chapter 1 from bjon66 on August 31, 2008

Daddy Snape, eewwww, how disgusting... lol

Review for If You Love Me Chapter 1 from Snarf on July 29, 2008

This didn't really hold my attention as well as I hoped it would. I mean, Snape suddenly calling Harry his first name and changing his completely hateful attitude annoyed me enough that I couldn't get any deeper into it. Then, you suddenly made Harry dark, which I love but at the same time also hate because it was so sudden with no foreshadowing beforehand. Meh, I've seen better from you. This is always good practice, though.

Review for If You Love Me Chapter 1 from Drajjen on July 28, 2008

Hope this doesn't post twice, as I wasn't logged in when I iniatlly reviewed. At any rate, I'll just come out and say it. I threw up a little bit in the back of my mouth when reading this. I like dark harry as well as the next guy, but a Snape is your father thing....well lets just say that no matter how well you right this story I will never read another line of it. That being said, I wish you luck, maybe other folks like this kind of stuff.

Author reply
Dude, lemme be one of the first to agree with you. I hate Severitus with a passion normally I reserve for only for slash. I wrote this mostly for two reasons. One, the plot bunny was good, and I wanted to see how a bunch of the severitus fangirls over on ff.net would react. Two, the parallels between both Harry and Voldemort making a Horcrux out of their respective fathers was just to tempting not to write. But, yeah, I completely see what you're saying.

Review for If You Love Me Chapter 1 from Edvin on July 28, 2008

...Amazing. Really great story. Will you continue this or will you like it more as a oneshot? Anyway, your writing style is very entrancing in my opinion. I liked the last part: “I want you to show me, Dad.” Harry murmured, “Please.” He leaned back and forced Snape to make eye contact. “Show me how much you love me.” He grinned again. “After all...” The screaming began anew as another patch of skin was pulled off. “It's the least I deserve.” And the Horcrux part is a brilliant idea I haven't seen developed yet and would very much like to read some fanfiction about this subject. May your imagination always feed your quill my friend for, yours is truly remarkable. Sincerely, Edvin

Author reply
I'm not sure yet if I'm gonna continue it or not. I have a few vague ideas for a second chapter with Harry and Voldemort, or maybe Harry talking to Dumbledore's grave. Probably gonna do the first one, if one at all. As of right now, though, it's just a one-shot. I want to make the second one absolutely perfect if I make one at all, so, yeah... We'll see. Thanks for the review, by the way. The original credit for the plot bunny goes to Nonjon, who gave it up for writing on DLP. I saw it and couldn't resist trying to write it out.

Review for If You Love Me Chapter 1 from Lord Ravenclaw on July 28, 2008

This story started out so gay, yet turned into some funnies. Decent job.

Author reply
You know, that gayness was actually what I was going for at the beginning. I was going for the typical fanboy/girl you feel when you begin to read one of those. Do you have any idea how hard it was to write like that?

Review for If You Love Me Chapter 1 from Richardc269 on July 27, 2008

Very well written. I'd like to see more of it, unless you made it a one-shot. But its pretty well written anyway.