Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from KtheGreat on August 02, 2008

Bloody grinding leading into sex. One of the truest ways to turn a good story into a great story. I really liked your characterizations in this small peak at what I hope will be a much longer story. It was interesting seeing you express Cho through only description without her saying a single thing. It seems like Harry is the voice for both of them. I'd really like to see what lead Harry and Cho to this point, and where it will go after this scene.

Author reply
Cho is very broken in this story. She will speak, but it will be very short and very to the point. With Harry in nearly the same mind is is easy to know what she wants to say. Explanations in the next chapter. Also ... more blood and more sex coming.

Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from ChrisVittal on August 02, 2008

This was excellent. I demand moar, and moar psycho.

Author reply
Moar is on it's way. This will be a very different type of story. I hope you will enjoy.

Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from electric2book on August 02, 2008

Twisted and tormented. Love the way you portrayed Cho this way, it fits. I cant wait to read more...

Author reply
Thank Vash for picking Cho and the plot for this one. I just lent a demented cut of my own.. so to speak.

Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from whatareyouevensaying on August 02, 2008

Gruesome, yet hot. Very good work with this piece. I'm glad you decided to use Cho...no one else would really fit this scene.

Author reply
It's going to be a series of shorts, a walk on the seriously dark side if you get my meaning ... if there enough interest in it. Thanks!

Review for The Taste of Blood is Sweet Chapter 1 from PapaMidNite on August 02, 2008

Nice. Dark too, I like it. pm

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There is only darker and my need to feel the.... okay that was over the top.. Thanks for the Comment!