| Title: A Future Made | Minerva convinces Albus not to leave Harry at the Dursley’s and instead she raises him at Hogwarts | |
| Author:Immortal Aussie | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: PG | Category:Drama/Alternate | Reviews:2| Published: August 11, 2008 | Updated: August 11, 2008 | |
| Tags: Harry Potter, Minerva Mconagall, Albus Dumbledore, Harry, Raised At Hogwarts, Lily, Adopted |
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Review for A Future Made Chapter 1 from Edvin on August 13, 2008
I'll say the same thing as the other review you got. Fix your paragraph, apostrophe, config of the chapter and then I'll be happy to read and comment your story. 'till then, I'll be waiting...
Regards,
Edvin
Review for A Future Made Chapter 1 from Alssn on August 11, 2008
If you want for someone to read and review this, you need to fix it first. Remove string breaks, make some space between paragraphs, do something with vanishing apostrophes and quotes. It looks like you are using shitty word processor. If you don't have and can't acquire one, use online ones like Zoho.
You do this and I will read it. Now I can't be arsed to go through this wall of text.
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