| Title: Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation | In the summer after his second year, Harry Potter decides to spend a bit of the money in his vault to go on vacation with the Weasleys to Egypt. Instead of a relaxing vacation, however, his life is once again thrust into a life-changing adventure. | |
| Author:kmfrank | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: PG-13 | Category:Action/Adventure/Independent | Reviews:9| Published: November 24, 2008 | Updated: November 24, 2008 | |
| Tags: Harry Potter, Egypt, Mummy, Adventure |
Reviews 1 - 9 of 9
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from sh777 on November 30, 2010
An interesting story.
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from BetaGuy on April 28, 2009
Well good first chapter... I hope you update soon.
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from darklordmike on March 22, 2009
This is an excellent premise for a story; I don't think I've seen it done before. It could be an interesting way for Harry to make some (dark?) allies before having to face down LV.
Lots of promise here--but how about an update on 'Unlocked Knowledge?' Please?
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from Bellatrix_vecours on December 05, 2008
Very interesting. Don't think i've seen this idea before. Please, update soon.
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from stealacandy on November 29, 2008
Oh, a jolly good show
But I would like to know
when would this story grow?
Loved it so far, hope you keep up the good work, - mo
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from jettftw on November 29, 2008
Ohhhhh....that was a good chapter. Reachs out and hooks you.
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from hordac85 on November 28, 2008
Excellent.Keep it up.
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from Jeram on November 27, 2008
Not an awful new story, certainly. Unfortunately, I feel like although the writing is reasonably solid, there are a few too many cliches in this "Harry Goes And Spends Money" chapter. The Egyptian bit was slightly hard to follow, but interesting enough, and the general idea of Harry following on the vacation is one I don't think I've ever seen before.
Still, the Harry-Dursley interactions pain me a bit, maybe you should tone it down a bit. I'll keep an eye on the story in any event.
Review for Harry Potter and the Seminal Vacation Chapter 1 from Memory King on November 26, 2008
Have always wanted to see a story where Harry goes to Egypt.
Great stuff, looking forward to more!
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