Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 11 from carvell on April 20, 2009

This is getting alfully complex with all the diffrent side's wanting Harry for their own purposes, this chapter really dose show just how far some will go to get Harry (dementers) and for one second i thought you were going to turn this into a girl/harry fic, you pulled harry's reaction to the plan nicely unlike other fic's where Harry cant wait to put his skirt on..... 5/5

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 11 from Inziladun on April 19, 2009

Good Chapter, I like that Harry is wanted by different sides, give him no rest, he must grow up a lot to compensate for his childish_canon_counterpart.

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 11 from yared94 on April 19, 2009

I think it's Heisenburg and not Hindenburg.

Author reply
I'm a physics student studying quantum mechanics, my friend. I know it's Heisenburg - the Lovegoods don't, though.

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 10 from Inziladun on April 11, 2009

It's an interesting fic, Harry seems to be always in trouble but he is resourceful, I like it, good work.

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 1 from darklordmike on April 02, 2009

Nice first chapter; I really like that you began in the middle of things, rather than boring the reader with a rehashing of canon. Nice action sequences too. The only thing I found curious was the amount of anger Harry had built up for Dumbledore; at this point Dumbledore hadn't spent a year ignoring Harry and Sirius is still alive, so Harry is pretty quick to fly off the handle.

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 1 from adrian10 on March 19, 2009

I Love your story, please update soon. Please make this a Harry/Harem story, and independent Harry. Dumbledore bashing if you can!!!

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 6 from Lord Ravenclaw on March 12, 2009

I'm enjoying your story thus far, but I believed that the Fidelius Charm protected those inside a structure, not just those specified. Can I assume then that you've changed it for your own needs?

Author reply
Well, my latest chapter explains a bit more about this issue. Thanks for your review.

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 1 from iamstu on March 05, 2009

since you are changing things after GOF i am assuming that everything leading up to that is canon. so from what we know in COS the ministry can and has sent people into Hogarts to arrest and sentence to Azkaban, also in POA despite Dumbledore the ministry sent dementors to Hogwarts to look for Black. In GOF the minister himself brought in dementors to give Crouch Jr the kiss. So if Harry is thinking just about surviving I would think Hogwarts would be the last place he would want to go. Interesting story concept, seems to be well written. Cheers

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 5 from BJH on March 05, 2009

Miguel Prince, hmm? Any relation to a certain Half-Blood Prince perhaps? Even if Harry doesn't know that name yet. The tale is starting to get complex. I like it that way. BJH

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 3 from animekingmike on February 28, 2009

Interesting, can't wait to see more, would you think of adding this to fanfiction.net

Review for Renegade Cause Chapter 2 from Traveller on February 27, 2009

The story seems of to a good start, especially on it's premiss, but I'm a little surprised at the amount of guilt that is being laid on Harry by certain people. He was securing an incredible valuable resource in a time of war. The fact that he ran from 'the law'? Tough. When the law is corrupt to the amount that is displayed here, it has nothing to do with justice. Might as well say 'but you ran from the Mafia' in the same tone of voice. The law looses it's supposed 'moral authority'. The fact if those men were aware of said corruption or not, and condoned or suffered under it is also irrelevant. On a personal level it is regrettable for Harry, but not condemnable; in the end, they made a choice. Should one stand and be punished because the punishers claim "ich hab es nicht gewust" (an extreme comparison, I am aware, but in the end, true). The argument: 'they had families'. Does that mean they are worth more than an other? Does this mean one should roll over for someone because they have a family and are there for less accountable for their own actions? I'm not surprised Harry is not showing much remorse. If I were so condemned for a regrettable, but not condemnable act, I too would be extremely defensive; and the defence of a teenager is denial and sulking. Traveller