Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 6 from secca on February 11, 2011

This is extremely beautiful. I read through the entire fic in around half an hour, and yet your words have me in tears at the end. To evoke such emotion in so little time, only by the power of words - that is a true gift. Thank you for writing, and when I go to see if you've written more, I hope to find that the story you've hinted at, here in the end, has been begun.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 6 from Lord Ravenclaw on May 16, 2010

This was excellent. I hadn't read this before but it was really a rollercoaster of a story that kept me on my toes to the very end. Excellent. Now get to writing the story this acts as the prologue to!

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 6 from whatareyouevensaying on January 23, 2010

Well I loved the conclusion. I hope to see the longer sequel soon.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 6 from fooboo27 on January 23, 2010

This fic is excellent. I love the characterizations that you gave Harry and Dumbledore...they were just first-rate. I also enjoyed the writing style of having flashbacks to answer some of the gaps in knowledge. Really, I'm looking forward to the sequel to this amazing piece of work.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 4 from Jeram on August 18, 2009

An impressive chapter. Although the parachute was probably the most bizarre thing, since it is so mundane.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 4 from Voice of the Nephilim on August 12, 2009

A fine update to this engaging story. I'm very fond of your style of arcane magic, a rather original creation. It's hard to make it not seem ridiculous to battle demons and such with string, but you made it work. I'm curious, will this entire story take place in this arcane world? Excellent work, I eagerly await the next installment.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 4 from lectorsum on August 12, 2009

After several hours reading mediocre updates and even worst complete stories on two other sites, I decided to open up my link to patronus charm. Seeing your story I began to read and have found something of value. It is well written and has a peculiar plot that I am beginning to understand. I assume that further information will come along as Harry and Dumbles continue their journey. Neville lies close to death in an AU where he was feted as the BWL. Harry and Dumbles are trying to find a way back to life for him, which needs them to plumb the depths of magical beginnings. I look forward to further chapters. Tibi grates ago fabellae et probe. Observabo capitulum quintum. Habeo nunci Fabellae. Ave atque vale, Lector

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 4 from whatareyouevensaying on August 12, 2009

Another excellent update. It's a pity that Dumbledore's body is so weakened at this point. Still, his knowledge is invaluable. Looking forward to more.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 3 from whatareyouevensaying on August 10, 2009

Loving the story so far, but I have to ask why you decided to give Harry James' eyes rather than Lily's. I'm also more than a bit curious where he got his scar(s?) if he did so well through the end of his fourth year. Looking forward to more.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 3 from Jeram on July 19, 2009

Just read through this. Some fascinating ideas and interesting contrasts. I look forward to more.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 3 from Richardc269 on July 17, 2009

I really like this story and I hope you keep writing on it. I enjoyed this very much so far. Keep up the excellent story.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 3 from Voice of the Nephilim on July 16, 2009

Once again, awesome. A very exciting rendition of the Graveyard scene, probably the best remix of it I've seen. Does the entire narrative take place in the underworld? I was really off on my Skitterleap guesses, but it seems like the main narrative will always be Harry and Dumbledore, with an entwining backstory folding into the main narrative. I like you "elves". A lot. Hugely awesome. Well done.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 2 from Voice of the Nephilim on July 16, 2009

Hugely creative, this chapter. I can see why you were compelled to write this down immediately upon thinking of it. The "challenges" were a nice way to convey how hugely different this world is from the canon one. I think my favorites were Harry's encounter with the dragon, and the confrontation with Black. Harry certainly hasn't had it easy. I am curious about Neville. Are they actually traveling into the netherworld to retrieve him? I can't imagine many human wizards bringing him there, considering all the protections in place. Fantastic work.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 1 from Voice of the Nephilim on July 16, 2009

Completely awesome. With the wide range of diversions from canon, I assume that the coloring of Harry's eyes was not a mistake, but wholly intentional. I've really no idea where this is going, but it's off to a fantastic start.

Review for By the Divining Light Chapter 3 from animekingmike on July 16, 2009

I love it!