Review for Harry F'n Potter Chapter 3 from Erised7 on November 02, 2009

This story is hilarious! Especially Dobby's line before he leaves and the bit about Harry imagining himself screaming "Choo Choo", while doing her! Will here be more chapters? I hope you there will be. - Erised7

Review for Harry F'n Potter Chapter 3 from Mishra on October 29, 2009

A very entertaining short story. Just what Canon-Harry would need. Harry Fucking Potter.

Review for Harry F'n Potter Chapter 2 from Jeram on October 27, 2009

Fun - liked Dobby the Stalker. But I think I'm going to have to skip the graphic parts - not my scene, really. Erotic fanfiction is kind of weird IMO - just not that interesting to me.

Review for Harry F'n Potter Chapter 1 from Jeram on October 27, 2009

I enjoyed this when you put in on FF.net, and I still like it. I like the little touches, like Cormac and the Minister. I had to look up the sphynx reference (not sphinx, after all). Typos: "Um... to you to => should be "to you too" say thankyou to Slughorn => thank you He really thinks your amazing => you're amazing A protege, he calls you -> you sure you didn't mean "prodigy"? Cormac's characterization was spot on and hilarious. Well done.