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Review for Chapter 1 from World on March 17, 2010 at 07:39:42 PM
There are two things that make this story stand out:
1. "AVODA KADVERA"
Is this a word jumble? It's supposed to be Avada Kedavra.
2. "Halocosts"
What is this I don't even
Review for Chapter 1 from Richardc269 on March 11, 2010 at 08:36:18 PM
This story needs a lot of work. And the characters are too flat. And it is called the "Imperius" curse, not the Imperio curse. Might want to write longer chapters. You also left out of a lot of detail, as well as a lot of background information. Might want to work on that.
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