Title: Testing Defenses | Hermione decides to test the wards on Privet Drive by spending a night with Harry. And then it's Luna's turn. Then Katie's, and Fleur's, and Lisa's...A Harry/Multi story, revised and rewritten from the original ff.net and portkey.org versions. | |
Author:canoncansodoff | + / - | ASSSTV | |
Rating: R | Category:Humor/Parody/Independent | Reviews:35| Published: January 18, 2008 | Updated: January 18, 2008 |
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Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from MSgt SilverDollar on May 15, 2012
Great story you need to replace the one on FF.net with this version. I know a lot of people like angst but I for one don't. If I want angst all I need to do is read any newspaper.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 2 from MSgt SilverDollar on May 15, 2012
Grat first two chapters. I like this version a bit better than the one on ff.net, it's a bit funnier.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from snape504 on December 19, 2009
Fantastic! I love it! More, please.
Debby
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from happylady on August 06, 2009
I have been reading this story from the begining. And I thank you for posting such a
great story. So please continue posting this wonderful story
Until next time
Gloria
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from Shanty on July 08, 2009
Hah, this was great! I heartily endorse this story. Wonderful job! The only thing that could have made it better was if it was rated NC17 and in more... detail. Yeah.
Very good job, 5 stars.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from BetaGuy on May 24, 2009
Damn that ending was funny. Great story. Is it complete? Or is their more?
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 1 from djudge on May 05, 2009
What a fun story. I noticed that you haven't updated in a long time. I do hope you come back and finish the story.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from loatroll on April 10, 2009
Good work.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 7 from loatroll on April 10, 2009
Good stuff. I especially liked the last sentence.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 1 from loatroll on April 09, 2009
This is perhaps a couple of million times better than cannon, the poor guy deserves a bit of a life outside all the angst and people being stupid. Thanks for the read!
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from morriganscrow on August 02, 2008
Man, I do so love this story!
I had read it elsewhere, but this redo was just that bit better. I have added it to my alert list and will enjoy each and every update.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from Rubel on April 25, 2008
Neat. Well written. I definitely would hope to see more of this.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from FenrisWolf on March 24, 2008
Interesting ending; not too sure about the overall casualness towards intimacy, the whole 'friends with benefits' thing makes me twitchy. I know this is largely a fluff piece, but a polygynous relationship with so many females and only one male is a tIcking bomb. The nice thing is that it would take very little to shift the take to a HHR specific ending
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from Alcatras on February 13, 2008
Great story.
One question, how far will it progress and how long will it take?
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from Drajjen on January 24, 2008
I must say that this version is much much better than the one on portkey and ff.net.
Don't get me wrong, it's not because this one is more of a "harem" and not exclusivly H/Hr. I really like the H/Hr ship, however this is much more on the lines of what I expect from a teenager.
I mean, most if not all "straight" teenage males, if they have females basicaly throwing themselves at him, is going to give back as well.
Anyway, thanks for posting this version here.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from sch1av0na on January 23, 2008
This is a great modification to an already fun story. Please tell me that your going to continue the rest of the summer. Please!!!
I really like how this story developed and the fun tone that stayed with it.
Thanks for posting this version for us to enjoy.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from highbrass on January 21, 2008
Great story. I do hope you continue it.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from Silent on January 20, 2008
I clicked the link to this story, expecting it to be enjoyable in a silly, mindless, and rather smutty way. While not perfect (characterizations), it far exceeded my expectations. The ways the girls used to sneak in past the wards were creative, plausible, and well thought out. Overall, there was a definite plotline to the story. Thank you very much for writing.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from red_jacobson on January 19, 2008
now you really need to continue this story! Not only for the rest of the summer, but into the next school year. I really can't imagine that Dumbledore would accept the spanking he received from Harry, Hermione and Amelia.
I never would have pictured Mad Eye as a peeping tom, but, considering how he is supposed to look, I don't imagine he has a lot of luck picking up the Azka-bait *GRIN*
If you do decide to continue this, i would love to see a confrontation between Harry and Molly; not necessarily a fight, but having Harry convince her that he isn't a little boy any longer, and if she tries to order him around, she and the rest of her family would find themselves back at the Burrow in a very short time.
Red
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from Banner on January 19, 2008
* Laughing Out Loud *
Thanks - I needed that. It was JUST the perfect touch to my wonderful weekend. I love the humor, the snark, the real affection, and most of all, I love the intelligence displayed by the author. Great job. This one goes in my favorites.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from rune1806 on January 19, 2008
MORE MORE MORE, this is so much fun to read you have to write more. Please.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 8 from rune1806 on January 19, 2008
The bit with Tonks was great both times i read it.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 7 from rune1806 on January 19, 2008
I love the last line,well done.
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 3 from rune1806 on January 19, 2008
poor Harry, first noone told him of the peep hole and then Woods. It is a good ting Katie has dream catchers
Review for Testing Defenses Chapter 9 from Testament on January 19, 2008
I enjoyed this much more than the original. It's lighter, reads better and the smut is a bonus. Hoping you continue this for the rest of the summer.
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