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Review for Chapter 3 from Selonianth on January 27, 2010 at 07:39:51 PM
More please. Very good story. You might also think about putting this on Fanfiction.net also a good fanfiction site.
Review for Chapter 3 from elvin on November 18, 2008 at 10:12:54 AM
Quite an interesting story that is picking up nicely. I wish there were more for me to give a proper review on; however beggars can't be choosers. Your portrayal of Fleur is nice, although sending her underwear seems a bit ooc. Susan is also becoming a very likable character, and it's a shame Hannah had to die.

I suppose really the only complaints I can make are the lack of updates and the story line doesn't seem to flow very well. That's probably due to the lack of material however and I think it will probably be a lot better with more information. Hope to see this updated again soon.
Review for Chapter 1 from draghknar2003 on November 12, 2008 at 06:24:28 PM
thanks for the story, as well as the link to the new fic site. blessings on both of these.
Review for Chapter 3 from Ellisande on September 03, 2008 at 11:39:08 PM
Wow, love it. Want more. :P

Disdain =/= DIstain. Just something I noticed.

Otherwise, this has to be the first fic I have read which deals with a muggle/wizard war, and so far you are doing it excellently. I love the characterization, very interested to see how you plan to drag Fleur into all of this as well.
Review for Chapter 3 from HarpyPrince on August 03, 2008 at 10:09:46 AM
Really good other than the abbreviated names, seems lazy and makes it seem less professional. Anyways can't wait for the next chapter.
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Thanks for the feedback. I assume you mean the "PM" that's more of a title or and office instead of a name. If you've seen a name that has been abbreviated then it was a error.
Review for Chapter 3 from PapaMidNite on July 23, 2008 at 11:56:36 PM
wow, the end was intense, you should definitely continue. Will we see Fleur soon? Keep up the good work.

pm
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Yes, Fleur enters early in the next chapter. Thanks!
Review for Chapter 3 from scaryisntit on July 19, 2008 at 09:15:57 AM
Finally got around to reading this update and I have to say it was worth the wait. I really like where this is going - the fight between the Muggles and Magicals has already escalated to numerous casualties for both sides and the Muggles are certainly giving it their all. I think it is safe to assume that there will be seven day's of war. I do wonder if that'll be the end of the fic after that.

I hope you tell us why the PM chose to fight instead of being 'the bigger man'.

To answer your question; yes, I do want to see more of this.

Can't wait for more of either of your current stories.

scaryisntit
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
I think that's a good assumption "the seven days thing" as for being over ... yes this particular story will be over at that point. Everyone is assuming that the PM okay'ed the attack on the Ministry, that what passes for thair army doing the fighting, and that he chose not to be the bigger man... a lot of assumptions. All of which are wrong. ;p But you'll find out about that in the next chapter.
Review for Chapter 3 from sparky40sw on July 16, 2008 at 11:57:40 PM
Evidently the PM was un-willing or unable to 'be the bigger man', this attack seems to be pretty well planned.

Can't wait to see where you are taking this next

thanks for sharing
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
And thank you for reading.
Review for Chapter 3 from TxA_GunFighter on July 14, 2008 at 02:59:37 PM
Good chapter, Harry can't buy a break.

gunny
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Potter Law Number One.
Review for Chapter 3 from noylj on July 14, 2008 at 02:08:02 PM
I thought Fleur was in here somewhere? Will we learn all the stupid things that the Weasleys have done? Did Hermione enjoy being buggered? Why is Harry so willing to kill soldiers? Will he kill Aurors as easily? Enjoy story.
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Fleur will appear in the next chapter. Eventually we will learn more about Ron and what Ginny did at Hogsmeade. I don't think I'll give anything away to tell you that Hermione does not like taking it in the backdoor. Harry is doing his best not to kill people, but he's not going to endanger his life or those of others by screwing around with stunning charms. As far as the Aurors goes ... we'll see. Thanks!
Review for Chapter 3 from King Dimension on July 14, 2008 at 12:58:28 PM
How did the muggles get into the MoM?
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
That hasn't been revealed as of yet and I'm not tellin'
Review for Chapter 3 from wolf550e on July 14, 2008 at 01:29:57 AM
Awesome. But I don't know if muggles really can win an all out war if some powerful magicals who know muggles well enough want revenge. I mean how hard would it be to destroy the power plants, bridges, sanitation, fuel lines, ammo storage, etc. using magic?
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Both sides have a lot to lose and could be crippled easily. Find out how I'm goiing to do it starting next chapter.
Review for Chapter 3 from lordblack on July 13, 2008 at 05:33:09 PM
I love it!! Its so wonderful.
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Thank you, and I love reviews! They are so wonderful as well. So we are a matched pair.
Review for Chapter 3 from Lord Ravenclaw on July 13, 2008 at 04:55:28 PM
Nice chapter. I found it interesting that not long after he said leave it alone, it's come down to this...the Ministry was attacked. Seems quite silly. Do the Muggle and Magical worlds descend into war now? Will the PM be pissed because he defended the Ministry? Look forward to more.

-Raven
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Well, I think the PM showed his reluctance to drop the matter and we don't know what went on behind the scenes after Harry left. I always picture the US Joint Chiefs stereotypically urging the Pres. to attack and using damn good reasons to do so. I'm sure GB has the same people doing the same things. We'll find out more later.

War is upon us. No, the PM won't find out about the Ministry but he wil find out about what happen directly after and then we'll see if Harry loses his nifty new ID. Harry's about to get well and truly pissed and will be aided by the lovely and sometimes scary Fleur in Chapter 4. MWAH!
Review for Chapter 2 from wolf550e on June 20, 2008 at 05:13:02 PM
Awesome and original. And believable!
Review for Chapter 2 from ReviewerOfTheWest on May 05, 2008 at 07:25:16 PM
Yes, we've seen this much before and it was good. Now please continue....
Review for Chapter 1 from DaiShain on February 15, 2008 at 02:09:48 PM
Deffinatly interesting and not somthing ive seen before (if you know any please tell me).
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Thank you! That's the reason I've started the project. I haven't seen anything like it either and if you find something let me know as well.
Review for Chapter 1 from Alssn on February 14, 2008 at 11:03:15 PM
The war, from the very beginning... Interesting, but extremely hard to do properly. It'd be great if you will manage this.
Personages seems more-or-less in-character, though it's hard to say after only one chapter.

Now, in my opinion, Harry's comment concerning Ron's sexual life was slightly forced. You'd use such personal insults when you want to provoke someone or broke any relationship whatsoever — not when your best friend (and he is — as this is Post-DH story) irritates you. So this episode just shows that you dislike Ron... I think. Do you?

By the way, all information included in the chapter aside from AN is excessive. Reader will see most of it at the top of the page, and can use your profile to get more. IMO in current state it looks a bit... unclean. Just saying that you may delete it without actually losing anything.
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
The difficulty level of this story is already showing it's ugly head, but the challange makes me want to write that much more. So it's a good thing.
Harry insulting Ron will explain itself later. I used a lot of disposible lines in this chapter with the intent of explaining things later.
I really don't mind Ron, or any of the Weasleys. I don't really think Ginny and he were matched well but not enough to hate the pairing. More on that later.
The reason I use so much info at the begining is a personal one. It has to do with an underaged girl reading one of my rather racey stories and her mother doing everything she could to destroy me. Now if they read it there is no reason whatsoever for others to come at me. If they do I just say that there was a very bold warning at the begining and it's their own fault for not supervising their curious child.
Review for Chapter 1 from Uthra108 on February 14, 2008 at 11:43:26 AM
I like it so far.

Well, therejust seem to be some thing a bit unclear... like

...do we have have to assume that the time during your little time jump went canonwise? Is Voldemort still out there or is this going to be purely muggle vs. magical?

But since I bet that this surely will be made clear in the next chapters, I am curious to your appoach on Fleur.

So, keep it up!
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Yes, everything that happened in the years inbetween is canon. While there will be some scenes that will be inserted later there will be nothing that disputes the events between books 5-7.

Since it is canon there will be no Voldemort with no hope whatsoever of returning. That isn't saying that there will be no Pureblood sabre rattleing, there will.

Thanks for commenting
Review for Chapter 1 from MysterioX on February 13, 2008 at 04:13:46 PM
Interesting
Author reply from Heather_Sinclair
Thanks ... I think
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