| Title: Make Room for the Wicked | The Order vows to destroy Voldemort, not knowing how far the darker members will take it. Meanwhile, several gory attacks leave the Hogwarts Houses divided against themselves. No romance. | |
| Author:Passive Slytherin | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: PG-13 | Category:Action/Adventure/Alternate | Reviews:1| Published: March 09, 2008 | Updated: March 09, 2008 | |
| Tags: Harry, Runes, Mundungus Fletcher, HBP |
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Review for Make Room for the Wicked Chapter 1 from bukay on March 11, 2008
Well, you need to work on characterisation a bit as well as describing the surroundings. Moreover the story is a bit chaotic, well it is a prologue so I hope that you'll explain everything, like what was Harry doing with Dung etc... Anyway... it's not so bad, looking forward to reading more.
Author reply
Thank you, I appreciate the input. And, on the beta front, I've contacted one. Hope and pray.
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