Title: Unknown Memories Harry Learns the horrible truth of what the future holds and begins his quest to become the perfect wizard and change the future of death and destruction he's foreseen. Not yet realizing what the consequences of his actions will be, he finds himself becoming a catalyst of a revolution against centuries of oppression. 4th Year AU, Harry & Katie Bell relationship.
Author:Fission + / - | ASSSTV
Rating: PG-13 | Category:Action/Adventure/Independent Reviews:26| Published: June 06, 2008 | Updated: March 12, 2009
Tags: AU, Ollivander, Sirius, Katie Bell, Triangle Love, Tournament, Goblet of Fire, Harry, Independent
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Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 15 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
Your Trials of Magic so far seem to be better than canon's competition.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 14 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
I've wanted Draco to suffer from his actions in a significant way. This looks like it might be it. Interesting how Harry could "travel" to study with Ollivander, et. al.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 13 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
I can't wait to hear more about Ollivander's cabal. The three additional schools will certainly add spice to the year. Will you have additional events since they are showing up 1-1/2 months earlier than canon?
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 12 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
Very different World Cup all around. What of Winky, I wonder.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 11 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
Very interesting - Charlie's explanation about Percy and the twins.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 10 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
Great events. I've often thought about making the venom and tears fight each other in Harry. Clever.
Author reply
Thank you for all the wonderful reviews! It's great to know someone actually likes my stories. :-) I really liked the idea of far reaching consequences for some of his earlier adventures and the pain Harry feels from the venom, and his bond to Fawkes will actually come in to play more later on. Feel free to let me know if you have any other comments, ideas, or questions. I always enjoy talking about my stories. Fission
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 9 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
More great advancement of the relationship and Harry's magical abilities and understanding. Good work.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 8 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
Another excellent treatise on your theories of magic.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 7 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
You continue to develop a fascinating theory of advanced magic.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 6 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
1 - The tourist attractions, particularly the Cetera Zoo - were terribly creative work on your part. 2 - Since this is a Harry/Katie, Katie will survive the revelation that Harry is just clueless, and not as attracted to her - that he is aware of. 3 - You have very clever explanations about magic and how to make it more effective rather than powerful. Loved the examples and analogies. Very well done.
Author reply
Had a great time writing that chapter. What I wouldn't give to be able to visit the Cetara zoo... Coming up with the ideas for magic was pretty time consuming, but I liked how it gave the story an extra bit of realism. I'll hopefully have even more in the chapters to come
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 5 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
Excellent introduction for a potential girlfriend. Few people nod to just how socially stunted Harry is due to the Dursleys. This works. I await seeing how Katie transitions his thoughts to herself from Alicia in underwear.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 4 from Aaran St Vines on May 02, 2009
This continues to be a unique story - high praise in HP fanfiction. It's also well written. I like Ollivander and his motivation. His selection of teaching material as you've outlined it is quite good also.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 3 from Aaran St Vines on May 01, 2009
This was a great passage you wrote: "Ollivander believed that being a wizard was far more than just using magic, and decided he would teach Harry how to become a 'proper wizard,' and not 'a Muggle who can use magic.'" The distinction of a proper wizard is a wonderful concept. Terrific relationship you're building between Harry and Ollivander.
Author reply
Thanks, I really worked hard to try and make this story different than many I read in Fanfiction. Hopefully I'll be able to carry that concept out throughout the rest of the story. Fission
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 2 from Aaran St Vines on May 01, 2009
Interesting. I only know of one other tale where Ollivander gave Harry significant educational help, and I wrote that one.
Author reply
That's great. So many people use Ollivander for such small, bit parts that it's nice to see someone else use him as well. Whats the name of your story? I'd like to read it sometime.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 1 from Aaran St Vines on May 01, 2009
Several interesting twists I've not seen before. Great start!
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 13 from hordac85 on September 08, 2008
good
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 13 from Awelowynt on September 08, 2008
Thank you ever so much for writing such a thoroughly enjoyable story. I have one major complaint, however - There's not any more to read! I eagerly await your next installment.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 3 from Awelowynt on September 08, 2008
So far, this story has been an absolute joy to read. The basic premise of future memories is reasonably original, but the use of Ollivander as a mentor is something I don't believe I've ever seen before. The fact that you've written his character in a convincing manner and with more depth than a storefront are also things I'd be hard pressed to find. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 13 from Glrasshopper on July 13, 2008
Brilliant work so far. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 10 from Kyle_Dodge1 on June 09, 2008
Harry is a huge Douchebag. He is Whiny and a pussy. It is harder to read this as I go along. He better harden the Fuck up.
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 13 from Memory King on June 08, 2008
Outstanding developments, I sincerely hope Harry can discover Crouch's identity before the climax, that would ultimately make things much more entertaining, IMHO. Loving your story, can't wait to read more of it. Keep writing!
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 11 from Memory King on June 08, 2008
I really should be going to sleep, but this is just too amazing a story. Pure gold!
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 5 from Memory King on June 08, 2008
Eliminating excess movement and saying, rather than "shouting, spells were two of the more important lrssons..." What was that supposed to mean? Loved that chapter to death, would never have wanted to endure the effects of this cliffhanger. Well done!
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 4 from Memory King on June 08, 2008
"The Definitive Guide for Muggleborns. The third book was labeled Runic Ruins..." "The third morning was dedicated to transfiguration and Ancient Ruins..." Jarred me out of the story for a short while, impressive story otherwise. This is growing into one of my favourites. Keep it up!
Review for Unknown Memories Chapter 2 from Memory King on June 08, 2008
"I can relive all my classes so I can learn more? I didn't try very hard before, but this year I learned the Patrons Charm..." "During their chat, Harry found out why so many visitors at Diagon Alley..." Only mistakes I spotted. This story is getting very intriguing, with Ollivander getting involved and all. Excellent work!
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