Review for Meddlen Worms Chapter 1 from Ame Suisei on June 30, 2008

Got to admit that Harry / Luna is one of my favorite parings. And this is a shining example of why.

Review for Meddlen Worms Chapter 1 from World on June 21, 2008

I liked it. I think Harry's focus on Luna's breasts were not appropriate and rather useless towards the story. It conflicts with with the line near the end "Beautiful? Did he really just think of Luna Lovegood as beautiful?" I agree with yak, the last two sentences are a tad over the top, something a little more down to earth would be better. But still, nice one-shot. 4/5

Review for Meddlen Worms Chapter 1 from yak on June 18, 2008

It's rare to see Luna written so well as a main character. You also captured Harry's reactions to a healthy teenage girl accurately and with humour. The only problem I have with this fic is that a few of the lines in the last scene seem kind of trite. “Wit and faith and love are man’s greatest treasure” and "He had his Luna, had his freedom. And that was enough." I might be worrying at nothing though. Congrats on a wonderful piece of romantic Luna fiction.

Review for Meddlen Worms Chapter 1 from Jeram on June 18, 2008

Hmm... well, I think this a very well-written story, although it didn't quite match up to my expectations (not sure if that's a good or bad thing). I think you have some talent, but perhaps I'd like to see some more from you in other genres (although I haven't read your other story yet). Nicely done.

Review for Meddlen Worms Chapter 1 from Shade101 on June 17, 2008

Hell Yeah! Love the Lovegood. -Fic was awesome, Id love to see you write a full length H/L

Review for Meddlen Worms Chapter 1 from Jearom on June 17, 2008

Great one-shot. You write a very good Luna!

Review for Meddlen Worms Chapter 1 from Lord Ravenclaw on June 17, 2008

Harry/Luna :). Nice little ficlet, I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.