Review for The Ten Plagues Chapter 6 from Eressar on January 26, 2011

Awesome story! Hey, is it just me or does this fic seem like a videogame? I could even imagine the little spheres on the corner of the screen indicating exactly which reality I was in.

Author reply
Thanks - I know exactly what you mean. And sorry for the weird italics marks, apparently something got screwed up in the formatting; I'm fixing it now.

Review for The Ten Plagues Chapter 5 from entropic4ever on January 02, 2009

Ah! Ginny attacks Bill and Ron! Good twist. I look forward to reading the next chapter as soon as you post it. I really like this story, but this chapter had more Ron and Bill than Harry. Try to focus more on Harry next time? Please? It's your story, so do what you want with it, but more focus on Harry would be great.

Author reply
Thanks a lot for your comments - I don't think the Harry focus will be a problem any more.

Review for The Ten Plagues Chapter 4 from entropic4ever on January 02, 2009

More explanations, and the first dimension shift. I love it! This story is now very easy and enjoyable to read. I like that Harry is developing a mind of his own. Good for him.

Review for The Ten Plagues Chapter 3 from entropic4ever on January 02, 2009

Finaly, everything is explained! I'm glad that I decided to keep reading, because this really is a great story. It's well written, and has a highly original plot, which is difficult to find in fanfiction. Good job.

Review for The Ten Plagues Chapter 2 from entropic4ever on January 02, 2009

Much clearer and easier to read! I like this chapter a lot, and look forward to reading the next.

Review for The Ten Plagues Chapter 1 from entropic4ever on January 02, 2009

This is really confusing, but I'm going to keep reading, because I'm pretty sure everything wil be explained in later chapters. Good story so far.

Review for The Ten Plagues Chapter 4 from tmctflyboy on January 21, 2008

love the story, glad that harry isnt just taking their word for it. look forward to the next chapter