Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 1 from bluezy on August 09, 2009

Oh, I get a dog? COOL. bluezy

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 20 from BetaGuy on April 29, 2009

You know after reading your opening chapter where you go on about how horrible this is I was expecting myself to not even be able to finish this. But I did. Its not bad, or its not too bad. You have lots of original ideas among the usual cliches and overused plots. I was surprised how well you pulled off the OCs. Amanda Snape is a great character with lots of potential. Maybe you should recycle her for another story... Anyway while its not one of the greatest fics I have ever read, to be honest I enjoyed reading some parts of it. Some of the jokes were stuff I had never seen before. (The idea that LV has an addiction to potato chips was incredible, just imagine him sitting on a throne issuing commands while he has one hand in a big green bag of Lays Sour Cream and Onion chips. The thought that Dumbledore sends him birthday gifts is funny as well.) It was an interesting story while it lasted...

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 2 from BetaGuy on April 28, 2009

One huge Lmao the whole time I was reading this. Still I like this pairing and its really hard to find so Ill proably end up reading all of it.

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 20 from DBZVegeta on September 09, 2008

When I first started reading, I wasn't so sure of Harry's attitude in the first chapter. But as the story progressed it fell into place. Grammer and spell are excellent, I didn't find very many areas to call attention to. Please continue with this work.

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 20 from bjon66 on August 29, 2008

Earlier you wrote that Dumbles had 6 wives.. Grindelwald was his first wife, Snape was his 6th wife, i wonder who the other lucky guys were??? lol.. Overall i would say this was a good story.. Although the last 2 or 3 chapters kinda went deep to right field..

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 19 from bjon66 on August 29, 2008

This chapter and the last one seemed really, really fan girlish.. Snape is the only character i think is the most OOC in the story.. Still a good story though...

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 1 from bjon66 on August 28, 2008

First of all, i don't have a dog... They all died.. Your so-called vintage stories are much better than 90% of the stories out there.. You would be doing the World a Great Service by continuing these vintage stories, God would smile down on you in happiness... lol.. Course, thats my opinion... TTFN

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 20 from modulus on August 07, 2008

This story is really good... even if you may have a certain flair for dramatics. I can see the influence this story has had on your (IMHO) best work, Resistance of Azkabam. -Modulus

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 20 from QundraDraconium on July 11, 2008

you know there is such a thing as too many battles. You have a great story here and you're starting to skate dangerously close to the line.

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 20 from makotochi on July 02, 2008

This was always one of my favorites of yours have you ever thought of continuing?

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 17 from Lord Ravenclaw on July 02, 2008

Shezza, where's the rest? I know there's parts after this, what with Harry sitting at the kids table when Dementors attack with the muggles...and the old curse he uses to destroy the vampires. Entertaining though.

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 1 from lordblack on July 01, 2008

I'm so glad you put this story here. It is one of my favorites and I haven't been able to read it forever!

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 17 from bukay on July 01, 2008

Well, the first part was different, I'd say 3,5/5 the second part was worse, 3/5. Anyway, this line made my day : "Machineguns, rifles, pistols and RPG’s fired all at the same time" who let them use (I'm talking about muggles here) RPGs in the middle of London??

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 17 from kmfrank on July 01, 2008

OMG TIS IS SOOOO GUD!!!111!! U SHULD RITE MOAR NOWW!!!1111!! Just kidding, Shezza. Nice work, it's always fun to see some old gems.

Review for Harry Potter and the Revelations Chapter 2 from Rostam on July 01, 2008

plz update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!1!