Review for Harry Potter and the Power of a Legend Chapter 2 from Inziladun on May 10, 2009

This site is called "The last Bastion of Quality Harry Potter Fanfiction". You need to improve this fic if you want to say it belongs here, you need a beta and you need to know that your fic is very similar to joe6991's Hero Trilogy, so you need to do it better if you don't want it considered simply a bad copy. Apart from all the mistakes in both chapters (Then instead of than, down instead of done, their instead of there, was when it should be in plural,...) I couldn't help but notice the sudden change in the "protector": at first he is angry and asking who is Harry and how did he got there and then he says Harry's arrival was predicted for many millenia... Well, I don't think I'm going to enjoy this fic, however, you can improve it, there are lots of sites which give helpful advice during the writing of a fic even correcting the mistakes, maybe you could try Darklordpotter.net. Good luck.

Review for Harry Potter and the Power of a Legend Chapter 1 from Glrasshopper on April 20, 2009

Curious. I've never really been a fan of GodLike!Harry stories as they tend to burn through the plot too quickly It will be interesting to see where this goes, and if you are going to include any more back-story.

Review for Harry Potter and the Power of a Legend Chapter 1 from Inziladun on April 19, 2009

Well, I found several writing mistakes, I wouldn't say anything if it weren't for the fact that they do not seem to be a typing error but a misunderstanding between similar sounding words. Maybe I'm wrong, as I'm not an English speaker, but if you find that I right, I would recommend “hiring” a beta. The conflicting sentences are: he know had more magical power, he wanted it to due, Their he pondered,... As I've said I'm no master of the English language, so there must be more. About the story, I'm interested in the plot, its to short to know If I'll like it but from what I've read its got potential, I'll keep reading.