| Title: Ever Dawn | A few small choices can make all the difference, really. An alternative look at OoTP. Oneshot. Cho/Harry | |
| Author:Eyes.Radios.Lies | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: PG-13 | Category:Romance/Alternate | Reviews:4| Published: November 13, 2009 | Updated: November 13, 2009 | |
| Tags: Cho, Harry, ChoxHarry |
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Review for Ever Dawn Chapter 1 from tallica343 on November 15, 2009
Very Interesting. I know this is a one-shot but I would be interested in reading more if you decided to do a sequel.
Review for Ever Dawn Chapter 1 from ZanyMuggle on November 15, 2009
Believable (within the HP context). Well written. Enjoyable.
Not too tart; not too sweet.
Thanks for writing.
Interesting, I can handle the deficiencies for a oneshot. Um... since when does Cho have "brown skin"? But it's not bad. It's more like there's an interesting idea in there, but I think the writing could stand to be a lot better. As of now, it's a little haphazard and cliched in places, with only the original idea keeping it above the pack. Still - nice effort.
Review for Ever Dawn Chapter 1 from whatareyouevensaying on November 14, 2009
Nice little oneshot. Wound up being very interesting, and I really like the way you handled Cho.
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