| Title: Albus Potter and the Elder Wand | There is dawing evil...and they are after the Deathly Hallows! The third Wizard War brings Albus and his siblings to the White Tomb. The Halocosts follow and then they are on a heat on heat battle for the legandary Elder Wand! | |
| Author:apagefull | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: PG | Category:Action/Adventure/Evil | Reviews:2| Published: March 12, 2010 | Updated: March 12, 2010 | |
| Tags: Jmaes Potter, James Potter, Halocosts |
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Review for Albus Potter and the Elder Wand Chapter 1 from World on March 17, 2010
There are two things that make this story stand out:
1. "AVODA KADVERA"
Is this a word jumble? It's supposed to be Avada Kedavra.
2. "Halocosts"
What is this I don't even
Review for Albus Potter and the Elder Wand Chapter 1 from Richardc269 on March 11, 2010
This story needs a lot of work. And the characters are too flat. And it is called the "Imperius" curse, not the Imperio curse. Might want to write longer chapters. You also left out of a lot of detail, as well as a lot of background information. Might want to work on that.
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