Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from Voice of the Nephilim on May 21, 2008

Quite the nice beginning. I'm not sure how vastly different this would be from canon, as I'm sure Voldemort would continue to operate in secret for a long time to come, as with the world thinking him dead, he could recruit in the shadows. Here's to hoping there be more to this story. I noticed that you hadn't uploaded Potter's Resistance to PC. I'm hoping that wasn't a deliberate oversight, since that wouldn't bode well for the story.

Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from whatareyouevensaying on March 21, 2008

I can only hope you decide to continue with this soon. It's an outstanding start.

Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from Memory King on February 20, 2008

Really interesting start here, sounds like this could provide me with quite a lot of entertainment some day. Take as much time with the next one as you need, I can be patient when the situation calls for it. Looking forward to more!

Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from KtheGreat on January 29, 2008

This little teaser has gotten me very intrigued. I enjoyed interactions between the Lestranges and Barty, and Barty's role-playing. Is their intent to bring Voldemort back early?

Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from Duckweed on January 28, 2008

One problem. "My father is the [i]freaking[/i] Chief Auror, Bellatrix" “Yeah, we don't run a [i]freaking[/i] day-care centre here," This fic's rated R. You're allowed to say dirty words. I don't picture dark wizards saying "freaking", do you?

Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from SlytherinSupreme on January 25, 2008

sounds good, i'll wait for more.

Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from Imperator Pesmerga on January 22, 2008

Great teaser. Very interesting. Only problem with this is the speech of the Death Eaters was weird, and it seemed a bit unrealistic. Example: When they said the word "freaking", it just doesn't seem like the type of thing they'd say. Aside from that, it was pretty cool.

Author reply
You're right, I can't believe I missed that. I'll fix it up once I get back to this.

Review for The Renegade State Chapter 1 from Digitalstorm on January 16, 2008

Interesting. I assume that Voldemort will regain a body and take over the wizarding world. It has the potential to be a very good AU story. 4.5/5 so far.

Author reply
Yes, that's the plan. I want to make a story where Voldemort-run Britain ISN'T a hell on earth, but more like Nazy Germany from the late 30-ies - harsh but successful.