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Review for Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time Chapter 4 from Memory King on October 14, 2008
Much more understandable now, thanks.
Review for Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time Chapter 1 from Memory King on October 12, 2008
Somewhat rushed, but not bad for a redo fic. Where did the Sword come from? Still liked how easily Voldemort killed him after he reacted stupidly. You obviously want to go straight to the fun stuff, but expanding on the prologue certainly wouldn't hurt your story. Onto the next chapter.
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