Review for Path of Decision Chapter 60 from deckman1063 on July 20, 2010

Bravo! A good tale, worthy of Morpheus himself. I appreciate the way you managed to weave the two worlds together fairly seamlessly. There were some minor grammar and missing word issues throughout, spots where it appeared you just missed a word, or put in the wrong one. Just enough to be noticeable, but not enough to make the prose unreadable. Thanks goodness, since the story was well worth the time I spent reading it. Good place to end, too, else you would have gone off into the place every other "after Hogwarts" story has to go.

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 59 from Memory King on November 26, 2009

This chapter truly showed the potential of Alternate Universes, even if the story on the whole didn't end up all that different from canon in the grand scheme of things. Would have liked more Butterfly Effect, bu blowing up the MoM was enough to temporarily satisfy my urges. Ninja!Harry was very amusing. Having Harry wish Voldemort away would have been pretty interesting, though. It seems things are coming to an end, which is a shame for readers who want more. But all good things must come to an end I suppose. Thanks for writing!

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 52 from Atomic Lightning-bug on July 26, 2009

Hot damn, the end is in sight. I almost feel as if I'm cheating, as it seems most of your readers haven't read the series. I remember the Prez short story, so I know that history at least. What I don't know is how the hell you are going to use him. That's what I'll be looking forward to the most in the coming updates. It may be because I've been out of the loop from this story for a while, but the whole "love is great/sucks" conversation seems forced. Especially with Desires little revelations so soon after. It was awkward, and lead right back to the path that I thought Harry was already on in the previous chapters. Anyway, looking forward to whatever's next.

Author reply
I have no idea what the ratio is. From what I can tell it is split 50/50, but most people haven't told me either. Harry's problem was his lack of control and decisiveness, it's what broke in Ch. 48. Desire marking Harry gives a bit of that control back. It also gives him the same scar from Deathly Hallows without him jumping in a frozen lake like an idiot. Cheating? You went through most of the story without reading the Sandman. What you gained was a reference point but I try not to step on the story too much. Just think of what he symbolizes. Eight busy chapters left! Thanks for reading!

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 52 from Memory King on July 21, 2009

This was definitely an interesting update. Not sure if that last guy is Harry or not, only reason I'm considering the possibility is Harry's connection with time. Will be looking forward to more war related developments, and a solution to the love troubles.

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 51 from Atomic Lightning-bug on June 18, 2009

It took me awhile, but I had finally read through the Sandman comics archive you had linked in your FF.net profile. I think I now have a deeper appreciation of what you have shown us thus far. And I feel the reverse applies as well. It's a pity the link is now broken. Even before reading the comic I enjoyed this greatly.

Author reply
I checked the link about once a week because I was pretty certain it would be taken down soon, I'm surprised it lasted that long. Either way, I'm glad that at least one person got a chance to read it before it disappeared. Thank you for your kind words.

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 48 from Alssn on April 09, 2009

Oh wow. Unexpected and awesome.

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 43 from Memory King on February 25, 2009

Enjoyable, but still mostly filler that's necessary. Liked the subtle connection with the Endless, and the differences in the Dumbledore conversation. The Butterfly Effect has started to effect the little things as well, which is understandable with Malfoy a Minister and all. I assume Draco still has his little mission going? What prompted Dumbledore to seek the Ring later than anticipated?

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 1 from Memory King on February 22, 2009

Good to have this up here, in case FFN continues with its funky behaviour. Keep going.

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 31 from pyromaniac on February 02, 2009

Excellent work of fiction. I read it while I was supposed to be working on two papers, and I just couldn't stop. Of course, I hope this isn't the end! Keep it up!

Author reply
I'm going to force my way through all seven books. :) I'll probably put up all of Phoenix next weekend, and that will have my most recent chapter up. Vague outlines put the story on track to end at chapter sixty, so there's plenty more. Hope your paper was finished, sorry for distracting you! ~Lu

Review for Path of Decision Chapter 1 from Jeram on January 24, 2009

Great to finally see this on PC.net. But I still have to read the latest chapter, I'm a bit behind.