Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 4 from thyrokio on May 30, 2009

GOod chapter

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 3 from thyrokio on May 30, 2009

It was pretty funny, good work

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 13 from BetaGuy on May 24, 2009

Well I cant believe that I read this entire story I one day. Cant wait till you update this.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from BetaGuy on May 24, 2009

I dont mean to burst your bubble or anything, but the summoning charm is a spell that Harry struggles to learn in his FOURTH year... So, what makes you think that every person in slytherin house could pull it off in first? I know it kinda destroys the entire plot behind this chapter.... but hey plot hole is a plot hole.... Otherwise the story is great. Keep up the great work.

Author reply
First, I didn't claim that every Slytherin could cast the spell...some helped others (as stated in text). Second, consider my pen name...in my opinion, summoning a broomstick blind from a mile away may be a complex spell, but summoning a small, lightweight object that is clearly within spell caster's sight isn't...that's exactly the sort of thing that every young witch or wizard would mimic with accidental magic whenever they want a cookie/biscuit from the jar on a too-high shelf. And third, if that's the only plot hole for the chapter, then I'm doing far better (on average) than JKR did. Thanks for the review/comment though.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 13 from dragonrunt on May 06, 2009

I realise that you're predominantly a H/Hr writer, but given Harry is going to have multiple partners, you're kind of bashing us over the head with Hermione so far.

Author reply
Gee, and here I was expecting some of the H/Hr fanatics to complain about her complete absence from this chapter, his flirty banter with the Chasers, and getting to know Daphne better. Oh, well.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 13 from DJ32 on May 05, 2009

That i is one way to feed Harry, I look forward to more locker room in years to come. Thanks for writing & keep it up.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 13 from Nightwing510 on May 05, 2009

I liked how you described what happened when Harry gave the girls massages.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 13 from loatroll on May 05, 2009

Hehehe good work :-)

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 13 from keldon888 on May 05, 2009

Ok, I'll be the first to admit that I didn't actually think a random HP/Hentai crossover would work, but you are doing a great job. And this chapter is the best so far. Though that may be my Chaser infatuation talking.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 13 from SirZic on May 05, 2009

That was hot! Continuuuuuuue! Z.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 12 from SirZic on April 28, 2009

Great! Continuuuuue! z.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 12 from DJ32 on April 27, 2009

Nice now that Harry has his dad's ok lets see what is what. Thanks and keep it going.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 12 from Nightwing510 on April 27, 2009

I liked the way you had Poppy help Harry cover vup what happened with the troll.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from aduroconglacio on April 26, 2009

Nice. Although I do find one point that doesn't quite make sense, given your Harry's abilities and his unique history - surely he and his parents would have come up with clothing options that wouldn't result in him being *completely and totally* naked every time he goes Demon Mode? It was amusing to read that bit, but I'm just saying - he and his parents had to have thought about the fact that Harry manifesting his demonic heritage wouldn't be good for his clothing, and would have come up with solutions instead of just ignoring it for eleven years, letting him shred his outfits every time he got horny.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from Nightwing510 on April 26, 2009

I enjoyed the love scenes with James, Lily, & Emmaline. I also liked the way Harry got the best of Snape.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from pmczarnecki711 on April 25, 2009

I like this I really like this. It is nice to see something original and catching like this. Please keep up the good work.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from Cartooned on April 25, 2009

I can't wait to see what happens in the revenge! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from SirZic on April 25, 2009

Your story is awesome! hope to read more soon so ... Continuuuuuuuuuuue! Z.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from Glrasshopper on April 25, 2009

Snape saving a muggleborn? That won't go down too well amongst the death eaters... :grin: Can't wait to see what you have in mind for the revenge.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 11 from DJ32 on April 24, 2009

Well you were right that made me mad. But you gave fair warning & said there would be payback so good deal. Keep it going its a fun read.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 10 from Cartooned on April 24, 2009

Really enjoying this story and appreciate the quick updates. Can't wait to see where you go from this and what evil plan Snape is plotting.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 10 from Glrasshopper on April 23, 2009

So, the plot thickens. I wonder what Dumbledore is up to with Harry. Also is Harry really is the chosen one in this story? The only person who has been marked by Voldemort is a She not a He, and who would Voldemort consider an equal?(consciously or not)

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 10 from knitchick on April 22, 2009

So the two are plotting against Harry... interesting. Well then, as they say, 'Let the games begin.'

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 10 from DJ32 on April 22, 2009

That was the best Snape baiting I have read. Even if DD is being an SOB, keep it going this is a lot of fun & thanks.

Review for La Blue Wizard Chapter 10 from loatroll on April 22, 2009

Good work.