| Title: X-Venture | Gambit's Adventure to discover his real power | |
| Author:Lil' Gambit | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: R | Category:Action/Adventure/Alternate | Reviews:1| Published: August 31, 2009 | Updated: August 31, 2009 | |
| Tags: Xmen |
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Review for X-Venture Chapter 1 from aduroconglacio on September 01, 2009
Um, Lil' Gambit, you need to find a beta.
Grammar, spelling, dialogue tags, hell, all your writing conventions are just... bad.
Find a beta who can edit this story for you, and then repost this story. If this is your own work that you've decided to put up on the Internet, then you're not ready to be writing stories for the public just yet.
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