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Review for Persistence Chapter 8 from aduroconglacio on July 05, 2008
An update long in the waiting, I suppose. A great chapter - the developments on Harry's character and the conflicts he must face are simply amazing. I really want to see more - keep up the good work!
Author reply
Huh, thanks... yeah, the characters are what I'm counting on to keep this story different from the more... generic, I suppose, would be the right term - pieces out there. Glad you liked it.
Review for Persistence Chapter 7 from bukay on May 28, 2008
Well, I liked your story. The usual time travel extra knowledge and so on, however it seems that you have an interesting explanation as to how it happened. The only thing that I have problem with is the changing POV, although that way we can better understand diffrent people... Ah, well... don't give up on this one and update rather sooner than later...
Review for Persistence Chapter 1 from araevin on March 16, 2008
I've give you this its an interesting start to this fic. I've come across some but this one looks very promising,
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