| Title: Harry Potter and the Manticore Hunters | Harry Potter is the Boy-Who-Lived and in his first year at Hogwarts he'll come face to face with one of myth's most deadly creatures and those crazy few who hunt them. | |
| Author:etchedchaos | + / - | ASSSTV | |
| Rating: PG-13 | Category:Action/Adventure/Other | Reviews:1| Published: April 23, 2012 | Updated: April 25, 2012 | |
| Tags: Harry Potter, Alternate, Powers, Manticore, Hogwarts |
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Review for Harry Potter and the Manticore Hunters Chapter 1 from neopyro on April 23, 2012
Formatting errors all over the place. Looks like it was written on a cell phone. I recommend giving it some editing/polish. Other than that, a promising start.
Author reply
Heh, I know, was very sleep deprived at the time and was working off the cobwebs. When I'm ready I'll come back and rewrite the prologue to get rid of the abundance of errors. Also, seems I need to format everything in html via the editor as I'm uploading word documents and the site is having problems with them for some reason.
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